Name: Eri Fuyumi ttalgi

Age: 14

Year in school: fourth year

School Attending: St. Spica Girls' Institute,

Appearance: looks almost fragile as glass she could brake yet as cute as a button with a little spark to her that hidden by her shyness she always looks ready for well almost anything but proper at the same time . wears her new uniform proudly but even old habits come back wearing a scarf to hide her pretty face will this stand for the possible love interest ??

Hair color: .white silver hair like her hole family.

Hair style: long and flowing usually wears a bow or flower in it

Eye color: bright icy blue

Height: 5'6

Dress: a lovely short skirt with a tank top or a short white or blue dress some times she may even wear her favorite red scarf with her outfits

Personality: she adores her older cousin Akira Ai yet besides their looks there totally different this young girl is extremely shy yet does have her suborn side to her, shes caring and always concert that shows in her quite soft voice she also shows this towards others she loves flowers like most of her family yet what really sparks her interest is cooking, best home made cookies ever ! she always is their for others shes kind and sweet she has nervous habits like twiddling with the end of her scarf or with what ever she maybe holding even someones hand ( teehee ) she also is a hopeless romantic. she has her nose in the books and her mind on her dreams so if surprised a adorable squeak may come out she loves animals and that includes her pet ferret Yuki. She never gives up yet its tough to get started

View of the Etoiles: Since she has just transferred she find them ,.... interesting she watches them a little but is too shy to talk to them or anyone about them so she doesn't know much although she is every good at reading people one of her talents ( or gifts for being so shy ) and they seem very nice and a lovely pear . she finds Kitsuki Sha sleeping habits quit adorable and Sado Kagami seems .. by the book whitch Eri can relate too but how they act together may show the truth , as she said before a very sweet couple. she would speak to them though,,,, Sado is so very tall ,... its almost over whelming . and its not as if Eri cares that Kitsuki is deaf she acually would find her over welming for Kitsuki is quit a personalty . shes so out going not shy at the least . * sigh* maybe one day Eri will be that way


View of other schools: She actually likes them all yet Le rim seems too out going for her and Miator is very nice but almost too the book as it seems , although shes in Spica she has noticed some very intimidating personalty and she hasn't even gone father then the schools office > < maybe by the book would have been better though shes not one to give in so easily

History: Eri found normal public schools hard for all the boys teased her for always wearing a scarf and hiding her face even the Spica's school officials had trouble getting her to remove it to get her school picture ( profile picture )

Sample post: Eri was at the train station waiting to head to her new school she was nervous and found her self twisting her scarf lose string she jumped as she herd the trains whistle blow as it screeched to a stop. she held her suit case close as a young engineer helped her onto the train. it happened to be one of those few old fashioned trains wooden four person bench rooms first class was in front then a dinner car then second class as if class mattered to her. She sat down holding a small cage in her lap her pet ferret looked up at her. " i know Yuki , i am sure it will all go great but still,,,, " " squeak "
Eri giggled " alright alright ,, ill try and calm down such a smart sweet boy you are . " i do hope mama and papa wont have to pick you up , i never did consider the school might not allow pets ..she thought to her self as she looked out seeing the snow start to fall , of course they will once they see such a proper ferret you are. she smiled as her eye lids became heavy she fell asleep awaiting her new advenchers at Spica.

How did you find us i already new about you ^ ^ i play Akira ai ( thats also why i have them related)

Hello, your profile seems acceptable, though I would really like something more specific about the etoiles. They are interesting, okay, but what does she think of the handsome Sado or the cute, deaf Kituki? If she just spotted them and happened to know they were the Etoiles, what would she think? Does she find one or both of them attractive? Is she in love with one? Maybe she thinks Kitsuki is ugly and doesn't think she deserves Sado? These are just examples, but I like to know what she thinks of each etoile specifically, even if she doesn't know them.

So...could you please add a little?

Also, in the "How did you find us?" section, you wrote, "I already knew about you." so....how? Do you have another account here a long time ago? Did someone here bring you to us? How did you already know? xD I'm guess you also play Akira, so if this is the case, then when you make a new character just put the name of your existing account there. For example, "how did you find us?" you'd say "Akira here!" or "I also play Akira Ai" so I dont get scared and think you're one of the scary banned members trying to sneak back in or something. xD

And finally, not to embarrass you, but I noticed you have trouble with "faux amiees" or words that sound like other words but are spelled differently. Such as "pair" and "pear", "whole" and "hole". Try using the built in spell checker on the site, or online grammar checkers to avoid making this mistake.

Anyway, just add to that Etoile section and I'll look again and try to get you accepted. ^^

yes i am also akira i just wanted the charaters to be related . because i couldnt think of a good back story so i thought of the easiest one to be related to someone . .... hope that works . if not please tell me . and okay i will work on making that pharagph and oops ill change the spellings ... hopefuly ill get it right . and now scince i play both akira and hopeful eri . did you mean just let you know i play both or put it down somewere . ? and for th how dis i know part i will put more detail i was going to get on akira to pm you about it but forgot wasnt sure if you wanted it as the charaters view or my own .

also i replyed just know as akira because i am having troble logging in as eri . i believe i am typing it in right but if you can show the log in to Akira Ai some how id apreceat it . ( sorry for the spelling once again its hard to do this on my phone and spell check doesnt work . )

O.o? I can't see anyone's log in to anything. o.o

And yeah whenever you are talking to me as admin, just talk to me, never pm me in character because I get confused. xD All I meant is when you play one character and then make a new one, just say who you play in the "how did you find us?" section. So like I said in my other post, instead of writing "I already knew about you" you would just write "I play Akira Ai" so that way I read it and understand it's you. And do that with any new characters you make. ^^ You don't have to list your characters in your signature or anything unless you want to.

And yeah, it's totally fine to make them related. ^^

Anyway, let me know when you have modified that paragraph about the etoiles. ^^

never mind i was finally able to log in ,
i mad the changes i think i added a few things as all ,,, i changed a few things if that's okay . hope Eri can start rp ing soon looking forward to it.

Accepted, she's in dorm S19. ^^