A small breeze flew through the girl's hair, as a tear flew off her cheek. She whispered "Nanami...I miss you so much..." Ever since Nanami died, she has been helping people. But....Why did she decide to help people? She saw a girl sitting on a step, crying. She held out her hand and said "What's wrong? What's your name?"
"I-Inuzuka" the girl said.
"What a pretty name, I like it...I'm Haruka" She smiled "What's wrong, Inuzuka-chan?"
"My Girlfriend died."
"So did mine... Trust me, you'll get through it" She smiled a sad smile...
"Is that why you're crying...Haruka-chan?" Haruka's eyes widened....

(You're post is longer now, but I'm worried about you making your character interact with an npc or Non Player Character so much. It could stop another character from posting here...I'll go ahead and reply to show you what would happen if you have an npc in your thread. If it's not your character, than anyone can control it.)

The Etoile had left her place in the greenhouse, still avoiding her duties in the student council room. The scent of the water and the sound of it lapping at the shore. The leaves rustled together in the breeze. The colors were so vibrant with the autumn chill. The reds, yellows and oranges seemed to glimmer all around, and a few stray leaves drifted past her on the wind.

Her silver hair drifted in the breeze like tendrils of silver smoke, and her dark green eyes spotted the two girls talking. Overhearing their conversations, she wasn't the only one with a girlfriend that was no longer part of this world.

She decided to join them. She walked up behind the small girl with the red bows in her hair, and the girl she had been talking to seemed ready to bolt from Rin's presence. And she soon slipped away from them as Rin spoke to the girl,

"Hello," her voice was calm, and sounded smooth like a violin's song, "What's your name?" She assumed the girl would know her as the Rin the Etoile, right away, so she made no effort to introduce her self, and would not unless the girl inquired.


(See? I made your npc leave. That's because you can't have an in depth relationship or conversation with someone who is not a member of the rp. Or if you're going to, you'll want to bring the conversation and interaction to a close during your post. Because if you don't then you're controlling two character's under one account. If you want the other girl to remain part of your character's life, make an account for her and make her another character. Now, go ahead and reply. Consider this a free tutorial thread.. okay? ))

(OK, I get it now, thanks)

"H-Hi...I'm Haruka..." She said, quietly, almost a whisper. "How are you, Etoile-sama?" She made an attempt to smile but failed at the attempt. "I was just enjoying the sunset. I really like sunsets, what about you?" She looked at her. She felt a...deep sorrow in which she knew the other girl could tell. "So, how about you sit with me?" She sat down and offered a seat to Rin, in hopes to get to know her more...

The older girl smiled softly, "I'm alright I suppose." She thought of her roommate and her adorable face, even if was currently set in angry lines at her actions. At the sound of the girls second question, Rin directed her smile to the girl. "Yes, yes I do." Her eyes drifted off to the sky. it was painted in vibrant pinks, violets and oranges. The orb of the sun drifted down through the trees, and yet is last rays sparkled on the glittering surface of the water. Until everything was bathed in golden fading light. It was a magnificent sight that no artist nor camera could render. Rin took the opportunity to sit next to the girl quietly watching the world shine around them.

It reminded her of her first sunset with her a long lose face in her memories, her first love. Rin's mind wandered off into the memory...

Oh how her hair moves about her face in the cool fall air. Its inexplicably windy and the dark-haired girl has to fight to keep her skirt down, blushing brightly at the fear that Rin might see her undergarments.

"Rin-sama!" She calls happily running along the shore, "look, look!" In the tree sits a blue bird. it's colors were wonderful vibrant, and a red bird came to land next to it. "Aww do you think they're in love?" she asks Rin, eyes shining at the feathered creatures.

"Perhaps," Rin replies. The dark haired girl turns to face her, but her face is all blurred away.

"Rin-sama?"

"Yes?"

"Do you think we'll ever be free to love each other?" The girl's voice is hopeful, yet tinged with sadness.

"We already do." Rin replies, her voice is a soft whisper, almost like velvet as she pulled the girl close. The sunset bathing the world in golden warmth as Rin's lips lower toward the girls and--

A brisk and strong wind came over the two girls sending their skirts flapping around their legs. It was loud and the sun was already behind the trees. It seemed a rainstorm was on it's way, and even now the dark cloud could be seen rolling in behind them.

"It's going to rain," Rin called as the wind picked up even more, her silver hair flying about her shoulders. "Shall we head back to the dorms?" There was also the matter of curfew, with the sun setting, they'd be in trouble if caught in downpour after dark. She stood and held her hand out to the girl. Her skin was smooth and her nails were perfectly manicured and covered in shiny clear nail polish. She was eager to get back to her roommate, and she was sure plenty of time had passed to successfully skip out on her Etoile duties.

It was time to head back to the dorm, then, as if a period to that sentence one quiet raindrop fell onto her outstretched hand, before it rolled off to the ground. It was followed slowly by a few more. Rin stood perfectly still and quiet while she waited for the girl to take her hand.

"Um, Sure!" She smiled and took her hand. The minute she clutched her hand, however, the flashbacks of the car crash etched into her memory.

*Flashback*

She coughed, and turned to see Nanami, bleeding from her head. It took her a momemt to realize that she was bleeding, too. Hers was severe, but not enough to kill her. She reached out to the girl, and managed to whisper "N-Nanami...." then, she fainted.

Tears flew down her cheeks, but she tried to ignore the bad memories....