Name: Saiki Rise (Candy apple)

School Attending: Miator

Age/ Year in School: 12/First Year

~ Appearance ~

Hair Color: Dark blue

Hairstyle: Long

Eye Color: Light purple

Height: 4ft 5in

What kind of clothes does you character wear when she's not in uniform?
A black t-shirt with a hoodie over the top and baggy jeans.

What kinds of activities is your character involved in?

Japanse Tea Ceremony: No

Flower Arrangement: No

Ballroom Dancing: No

Needlepoint: No

Foreign Language: No

Band: No

What instrument(s) does she play?
Guitar

Are you a Maid? No

Is your character on the Student Council? No

Please explain your character's personality in 200 words or more:
She can get very shy when she's around new people, but once she gets to know them she can get very hyper and can get rather clingy. But she is also socially awkward and gets embarrassed really easily, and has to go somewhere quiet like a library to calm down. She is often found sitting alone reading a book with her earphones in or wandering around aimlessly at lunch or free time. She can also be very forgetful at times. The one thing that she hates most is loud noises or shouting, it terrifies her so much that she has to run off or leave the room, if it gets too much to handle she will bolt back to her room without coming out for a few minuets/hours depending on how bad it got. If anyone was to fall infront of her, she would gladly help them up and ask if they was okay. She would also hold the doors open for any staff or other students or she would attempt to break up any fights that occurred. She is really shy in general, but she was never afraid to help anyone who needed it.

What does you character think of the Etoile position as a whole?
She won't be able to handle all of the work because she gets stressed out easily.

Does your character want to be an Etoile someday? No

What does your character think of the current etoiles?
She thinks that the current etoiles seem really nice and would like to meet them one day. She also really appreciates their strength and kindness

What does your character think of the other schools?
She does like them but would rather stay at Miator, but she doesn't mind being friends with students from the other schools.

~History~

Please write in 100 words or more your character's history before she came to Miator:

History before Astraea Hill:
She used to be very popular at her old school because of her kindness and loyalty to others. Her mother is currently very sick but her father is doing really well with taking care of her. Sadly, she doesn't have any siblings but shes happy to call friends her family. When she was younger, her parents was going out for a meal and was bringing Saiki along with them but while they was on the way to the restaurant, they got involed in an accident luckily, they had all escaped after a few bumps and nothing tragic happened but with all of the noises like the screaming, shouting and crying has traumatised her which caused her to get really scared when theres loud noises nearby or something similar. Or if someone was shouting, even if it was just for fun, she would still tear up a little even though she has fully recovered.

Sample Post:
She sat alone in the forest, enjoying the gentle breeze but keeping close to the school, whilst sketching the scenery around her, catching every single bit of detail in her drawing. She tried her best to keep her drawing talent a secret because she didn't wan't too much attention or to become popular. As she was finishing up, she heard someone walking up the path and decided to chuck her sketch pad into her bag, quickly pulling out a manga in the process to make it look like she was reading.
Once the footsteps had faded away, she took a quick glance at her watch. "I'm going to be late... Oh well.." Sighing to herself, she packed everything away and started walking back up to the school. When she arrived at the gates, all she wanted to do was listen to her music but she knew too well that it wasn't allowed until school has finished. Taking a deep breath, she walked into the school building, bundled with nerves.

How did you find our website?
I was looking for RP sites and came accross this one.

Well first of all, welcome to the site, we look forward to having you. Unfortunately there are a few tiny things that you've got to fix.

First off, and easiest, you're missing something by your name. Check the rules again. Secondly, the personality is a bit too short. Perhaps you can fluff it up by talking about how she calms down after getting so flustered, or where she goes when the shouting becomes too much for her to handle. Maybe a bit of information from her history could be moved to personality considering it describes her polite nature and all that.

The third thing is her history. It's good so far but just a tad short and if you move it to personality, it would be shorter. Too add some more fluff, you could mention her parents, if she has siblings, why she hates loud noises, if there is something that caused it. The history does not have to do with school so you have a lot of freedom.

Again, you're real close and I look forward to having a thread with you.

I have edited the post :3

You are accepted, welcome to the Hill.