Name: Sienna Fuzen ( ttalgi )

Age: 15

Year in school: fourth year
School Attending: St. Lulim Girls School

Appearance: Her long red hair flows nicely across her back and shoulders while her bright deep green eyes show all her sadness yet a small sparkle of hope deep inside she wears light make up to hide her ,,, secretive life.. she has ripped jeans and a sweater with slightly to long sleeves, but at school she always does her best to look as lovely as she can .

Hair color: Red

Hair style: usually just out straight over her shoulders

Eye color: deep bright green

Height: 5 9

Dress: she has ripped jeans and a sweater with slightly to long sleeves, or a cute simple dress with knee high converse

Personality: She is super motherly in the way that shes sympathetic kind always there for you she at first might be super shy and timid but once you prove your a friend shes strong willed a tough smart cookie. a great cook and very loving she loves gymnastics since she had done trapeze when she had literally ran away to the circus . but she really loves to be held and loved for her past hasn't given that too her . though shes gone down some bad paths ,,, like stealing,, but when two young woman found her out on the street they took her in and helped her better her self and gave her opportunities that she never imagined and after a hard extremely tough cousty battle between her new mothers and her abusive father , shes here hoping to be able to learn at St. Lulim .

View of the Etoiles: As sienna entered the gates she noticed a red and blue crystal that had Etoilt constipation carved in the middle . She wondered what it meant and asked a student near by she learned of how the etoites where two woman that was connected and was able to show there beautiful connection to the school threw a fun companion seemed odd but yet very moving the latest etoits were Sado Kagami and Kitsuki Sha she loved how she herd that sado loved kitsuki that happened to be deaf though there was nothing wrong with it having her cousin Ray being blind she relizes having a disability does make it hard ,, its nice too hear that sado doesn't care about such things.

View of other schools: there beautiful and lovely the most awesome thing shed ever seen besides her mothers house .

History: Sienna was abused by her father at a very young age till she was thirteen, she then ran away to the circus she was happy and did the trapeze for awhile till the circus couldn't afford to stay open but every one that worked under it loved it too much so they began to use there skills ,, for not the best things , Sienna was caught by her now mothers while Sienna was trying to climb out the winnow , but instead of sending her back to her father they herd her out fell in love with her and felt a special connection they fought to adopt her and managed to win while the father tried to ruin it all with his abusive ways the mothers didn't stand for it and was able to prove to the judge that once almost fell for the fathers acting, that the father wasn't who he said he was , now the father is in jail and Sienna happy heading to her new school to hopefully move past her hurtful old life and begin a new with loving mothers and hopefully new friends looking forward to meeting them in all the opportunities at St lulim.

Sample post: Sienna stood by the mirror of her new bed room she looked at all the bruises her smile faded but she shook her head and thought to her self " new life new family new beginings ,,, new friends ,, new happy beutiful me ,, " she hesatated at the word beautiful as she lightly placed make up on her wounds she was smiling once again as her green lovely eyes found their way to the new red white platted uniform skirt and lovely white collar top shirt and red bow she got dressed and put her new black leather knee high boots as the zzziiipp sound entered her head she winced as memories of her fathers leather jacket entered her mind but a knock on the door made them disappear as her more of a fatherly figured mother entered the room " sexy as ever my dear girl " she laughed , as Sienna found her smile once again " should moms be saying such things her eye brow raised teasingly as her other boyish yet slightly more girly mother playfully smacked the fatherly figure on the head " no but your as cute as a button that is true are you ready hun ?"
Sienna thought for a moment stood up with a slight skip to her step and smiled brightly " yes yes i am " she winked playfully .

How did you find us? i play Eri Fuymi and Akira Ai =)

Akira, hello again!

This profile is pretty good, though your grammar and spelling has not improved (sorry!). Was this posted from your phone? Do you have the Microsoft Word program? I can give you a link to an online spelling and grammar checker if you need it. I would really like to see your skills improve in that area.

Also only Miator has the maid system, unfortunately since she is a Lulim girl, she can't be a maid. Sorry!

Other than that I feel I can accept you. I would just really like to fix this post grammatically before I make it official.

It was done by phone . but the spell thing for me on my lab top and phone are blacked out i cant tell which is witch i memorized how to post . and thats pretty much it ... i am tring i swear . although id like the link. on my labtop i dont have microsoft . i have always had this issue ... and i am getting better .. but not enough clearly . sorry !

spellcheck24.net/

This would probably work better on a laptop, but write your posts in the box in that link and it will underline spelling errors in red, and grammar errors in green. If you click on the underlined words or sections, it offers a list of corrections. Once you have corrected the post, you can copy and paste it here on to the site.

This would be difficult from a phone though, for your phone I would suggest download a free spellchecker app if your phone has that capability, or try proofreading your posts, capitalize each sentence, and if you aren't sure if you are using the right word, such as "there", "their" or "they're", don't be afraid to take a moment and check. It's okay to take your time posting and make sure it looks the way you want.

That's what we are here for, role play sites are fun for role play, but also for increasing literacy skills such as reading and writing, spelling and grammar.

I am willing to do whatever it takes you help you improve.

Back to this though, I see no reason why I shouldn't accept this character, but I also wonder if another character is going to help you, or just make it harder for you to improve.

I'll accept her if you want her and think you can still improve even with the additional character so just let me know. If not, she wont go anywhere, she'll stay here and we can accept her later. It's up to you.

Also, I'm not trying to embarrass you or be mean. I just care a lot and want to help. Also I know everyone makes mistakes, everyone has typos and I'm not perfect either. Sorry about pointing out yours and making such a big deal. >_> I feel like a meanie poo head.

She's in dorm L18 by herself for now.